Saturday, August 9, 2008

a feeling?


"a feeling?"
Here I am feeling it again, a feeling from so long ago felt for someone whom had no face and died a death only as memory but here it is again, felt again and still waiting. I can feel it creep up again long after what was deemed the end and yet this moment still exists waiting for the right alignment. Still lingering to find a moment cut from time, to exist forever folded upon itself never to let go and to always have that moment. You remembered me before you knew me and I longed for something I never knew was there, you felt the touch of my memory in a brief moment of alignment before we ever met, wandering leisurely with only those moments with no space in between to ever know we were ever together in a tiny slice of time cut away from the rest. In that moment we saw only the best thats why the pain is so real, thats why the pain is so deep, because I can feel it creep up again long after I thought I had left it behind, but I lied, I saw it again somewhere in those eyes, and in the end there to stand alone am I because I saw it again somewhere behind those eyes.
-Armando Torres

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

It is absolutely lovely. Cannot even come up with a suitable comment for it. COngrats, you have left me speachless... a rare occurance

Natalie Galitzine said...

My only comment is that: ...I cried.

Hugs,
Natalie

Kat said...

you amaze me

Bitter Chocolate said...

Oh wow. I've just found this blog and din't really expect anything when I started to read the post. How do you find the words so precise and descriptive for things that I had never imagined being described? This post was quite amazing. I have no words, all I can say is what I've just read is one of the most beautiful things I've seen in a long time. Wow.

Joanne said...

i hate you Mr. PEPSIlicious! u put me into cry with this post. very well-written. i can feel your emotions and to be honest... i can relate that much... it's hard to wait around for something that you know might not happen, but its even harder to give up, when you know its everything you ever wanted... huhhhhhhhh!!!