Tuesday, May 20, 2008


In the darkness that lingers around us all there exists something that tells us, tempts us, chooses us, and crushes us inside a paradox of sweetest things. He knows when you think of him and pounces all at once to where ever welcomes him. He sits in your room looming ever closer as your mind wanders towards him. Knowing the very moment to engulf your reality, overwhelming your eyes in horrors you never wanted to see. Granted all you know has some truth for there would be your proof to believe because in all that was misleading in his words there would be a base to fake his truths to you. But as your strength falters nothing you knew would hold true when the temptations overwhelm you. You would never know you gave in so long ago. Beginning your own demise in your eyes of a few moments before you so blindly gave away all that was of worth. His words have burned through your soul tearing apart your mind leaving the shell of a man, lifeless and hallow. A man who will never understand all he wanted to know. A man in eternal damnation burning in the fires of misery never knowing the lies were the only truths he realized.
-Armando Torres


Steph said...

Hey, this was pretty interesting. I even read it over a second time to get the effect again. :)

By the way, I found your blog on blogcatalog.com and since you're obviously into writing, I wanted to let you know about a new e-zine that me and a few writer friends are putting together.

It's called The Oddville Press.

We're still just getting off the ground so our website isn't completely finished yet. But you should check us out if you're interested--or better yet, submit something!

I like shorts you have up on your blog here so I'll definitely be poking around her more in the future!

Thanks and good luck with your writing. :)

Kat said...

WOW powerful, god I love your writing

TheFLy said...

And I love you Kat, thanks for reading. There's plenty to love, hopefully you will keep reading.

Anonymous said...

Okay, I liked the last one, but I love this one. I may take you up on the offer to stalk afterall :)